Here's an updated version of my Hole in one piece. I hope you will like the new one, always tricky to go from rough concept to more finished render. Kept everything on separate layers and alphas.
I'll continue answering your comments in my journal as soon as I get a free moment later today!
It looks great! The only thing I would have added is some grunge to the door and wall on the right. It looks too clean for what's happened around it. Maybe make the light dimmer too, like the electricity is interrupted or something.